hum baar baar padhe jaa rahe hai is kavita ko.Aapke liye ye faisla hai aur hamaare liye ek paheli."thodi duaa karungi tumse ho" ka matlab samajh nahi paaye.Kavita me ek aakarshan hai,paathak ko bandhe rakhne ki shakti hai..aapka andaaje bayaan gulzar saahab se milta hai..gulzar saahab aisi chije 3 line me kehte hai..jisko duniya triveni kehti hai .. :)
hi..according to yer poem...the 3rd nd d 4th line...u r saying..thodi galtiyan mein kar rahi hoon..nd dua karti hoon ki thodi galtiyan tumse ho..is it? am i right?else..Beautiful verses..carrying a deep meaning.Keep writing.U r good at expressing yerself..must say a bold feminist.
@ Saurav, Bahut zyaada keh gaye yaar. @ Meenal, Thanks.
nainy yar u r excellent with english but u suck at hindi but still manage to convey yur message so my suggestion to u is tat dont take my comments seriously so just write in watever laguage cause u seems to make sense somehow or the other
Shupriyo Bhai.. HMM. This really did hurt my ego. Hehe :)
Let me put it straight, it is one of the BEST poems(or triveni, whatever!) I have ever read. Beautiful! It's your life, you have a right to fall, rise and fall again. And believe me, it's fun!
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